I absolutely loved this story, but especially the ending! What's so funny is I wrote something somewhat similar (different but of a similar vibe) for a writing class I did in college as well and I struggled SO HARD with the ending. Endings have always been a weak point for me, but I really loved the ending you gave this story because it felt so true to these characters! ANGELO PUT CECILIA BEFORE HIMSELF TO THE VERY END
love it love it love it. Thank you so much for sharing this!
Ahhhh I’m so happy you loved it! I always knew how I wanted it to begin and end, it was the middle that always stressed me out and caused all of the rewrites 😂 I’m also happy you think it stayed true to the characters because tbh I feel like I have such a hard time with character consistency lol.
It definitely did! I also struggle with character consistency but also making them come to life as their own people, but these characters felt so real to me!
ugh I wish my brain worked that well lmao I always start with concepts that mold into something else as I’m writing and then I get stumped on how to end in a way that feels satisfying and true to the characters/story. I think you did a great job with this tho!
I absolutely loved this story, but especially the ending! What's so funny is I wrote something somewhat similar (different but of a similar vibe) for a writing class I did in college as well and I struggled SO HARD with the ending. Endings have always been a weak point for me, but I really loved the ending you gave this story because it felt so true to these characters! ANGELO PUT CECILIA BEFORE HIMSELF TO THE VERY END
love it love it love it. Thank you so much for sharing this!
Ahhhh I’m so happy you loved it! I always knew how I wanted it to begin and end, it was the middle that always stressed me out and caused all of the rewrites 😂 I’m also happy you think it stayed true to the characters because tbh I feel like I have such a hard time with character consistency lol.
It definitely did! I also struggle with character consistency but also making them come to life as their own people, but these characters felt so real to me!
ugh I wish my brain worked that well lmao I always start with concepts that mold into something else as I’m writing and then I get stumped on how to end in a way that feels satisfying and true to the characters/story. I think you did a great job with this tho!
Only 5 years in the making 😂